Today's NapoWriMo challenge starts: "Back in 1977, the poet Ronald Johnson first published RADIOS, an “erasure” of Milton’s Paradise Lost. Basically, Johnson took a copy of Milton’s long poem, and systematically erased whole words and even lines, while maintaining the relative position of the remaining words. . Today, (the challenge is) to perform an erasure of your own. You don’t need to start with a poem as long as Paradise Lost, of course, but a tolerably long poem is usually needed to furnish enough material so that the final product isn’t just a few words long (though erasure haiku might be a fun new subgenre). ...You can form a whole new poem just by taking words away! Once you’re done, you can leave the spaces as they are ..., or take the left-over words and keep playing with them, reforming new poems from them." I choose to erase and replace random words--nouns, adjectives, verbs-- in Rosetti's 'To a Caterpillar'.
Erasure poems based on Rosetti’s “To a Caterpillar”, by Shirley Smith Franklin
Rosetti’s Poem “Fast
Food” by SSF
Brown and furry Yellow and mellow
Caterpillar in a hurry fast food in a hurry,
Take your walk take your pick
To the shady leaf, or stalk of a hamburger, or hot dog
Or what not, on a stick,
Which may be the chosen spot. If your fav’rite choice isn’t something hot.
No toad spy you, No server will ply you,
Hovering bird of prey pass by you Nor ready waitress pass by you,
spin and die, Eat, repeat,
To live again, a butterfly. You'll have another chance to eat.
Or, to be short, the haiku, erase-only version:
And, take your chosen
what-not,
you by you again.
No toad spy you, No server will ply you,
Hovering bird of prey pass by you Nor ready waitress pass by you,
spin and die, Eat, repeat,
To live again, a butterfly. You'll have another chance to eat.
Or, to be short, the haiku, erase-only version:
And, take your chosen
what-not,
you by you again.
Erasure poems based on Rosetti’s “To a Caterpillar”, by Shirley Smith Franklin
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